Succulent Fruit

Member since 2001 · Posted 16 Mar 2002 · 9 comments

Gazing at this succulent fruit My breath gently caressing this swollen ripe treasure Breathing its intoxicating fragrance My tongue softly flicks at the blushing bud I feel the heat upon my cheek An exquisite scent from the hot moist flesh Throbbing now with anticipation I part this trembling fruit My lips and these now moist and flowing Knowing their union is near My searing tongue diving deeply Voraciously searching this fruits sweet pink flesh Devouring inside and out I drink deeply the nectar that freely flows Swallowing all that I am given As the writhing subsides In breathless ecstasy this fruit and I drained Delicious honey on my lips And the hot seed I have spilled Jc062601

Rate it

0 is the worst, 10 the best. Pick a number, add a comment if you like, then send it. Keys: 0–9 pick, Enter sends.

mean 5.78 weighted 5.78 rank 1737 views 205 View voting details →

45 votes so far. Yours would make 46.45 votes so far

9 comments

[0] anonymous 27-Jun-01/6:25 PM Reply

damn, I need a cigarette, you have a gift of sensuality

[0] anonymous 28-Jun-01/7:30 PM Reply

very hot...and visual

[0] anonymous 15-Jul-01/10:41 PM Reply

Damn...nothing like ecstacy with a woman. :)

[0] anonymous 25-Jul-01/6:29 AM Reply

i love the taste of a woman, too

[0] anonymous 18-May-02/6:38 AM Reply

A WRITHING ABOMINATION. THE NAUSEA HAS SUBSIDED, BUT ITS TOO LATE, YOU`VE DONE ME PERMANENT DAMAGE

[0] beakism 9-Jun-02/12:05 PM Reply

Wow, you've written quite an original poem here - I haven't seen any of these phrases used in any of your others. Keep up the good work!!!

[8] horus8 10-Jul-02/2:12 PM Reply

Chicks on bikes river dikes!a

[n/a] razorgrin 10-Jul-02/2:13 PM Reply

Jesus damn, you are a sexy beast!

[7] shwenatjadeflower 12-Jul-02/11:59 AM Reply

very hot i like the double meanings