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Succulent Fruit (Free verse) by Jody Conn
Gazing at this succulent fruit My breath gently caressing this swollen ripe treasure Breathing its intoxicating fragrance My tongue softly flicks at the blushing bud I feel the heat upon my cheek An exquisite scent from the hot moist flesh Throbbing now with anticipation I part this trembling fruit My lips and these now moist and flowing Knowing their union is near My searing tongue diving deeply Voraciously searching this fruits sweet pink flesh Devouring inside and out I drink deeply the nectar that freely flows Swallowing all that I am given As the writhing subsides In breathless ecstasy this fruit and I drained Delicious honey on my lips And the hot seed I have spilled Jc062601

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Overall Rank: 1738
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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Comments:
[0]... anonymous @ | 27-Jun-01/6:25 PM | Reply
damn, I need a cigarette, you have a gift of sensuality
[0]... anonymous @ | 28-Jun-01/7:30 PM | Reply
very hot...and visual
[0]... anonymous @ | 15-Jul-01/10:41 PM | Reply
Damn...nothing like ecstacy with a woman. :)
[0]... anonymous @ | 25-Jul-01/6:29 AM | Reply
i love the taste of a woman, too
[0]... anonymous @ 213.123.1.78 | 18-May-02/6:38 AM | Reply
A WRITHING ABOMINATION. THE NAUSEA HAS SUBSIDED, BUT ITS TOO LATE, YOU`VE DONE ME PERMANENT DAMAGE
[0] beakism @ 213.122.77.171 | 9-Jun-02/12:05 PM | Reply
Wow, you've written quite an original poem here - I haven't seen any of these phrases used in any of your others. Keep up the good work!!!
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jul-02/2:12 PM | Reply
Chicks on bikes river dikes!a
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.52 | 10-Jul-02/2:13 PM | Reply
Jesus damn, you are a sexy beast!
[7] shwenatjadeflower @ 68.12.149.5 | 12-Jul-02/11:59 AM | Reply
very hot i like the double meanings
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