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Succulent Fruit (Free verse) by Jody Conn
Gazing at this succulent fruit
My breath gently caressing this swollen
ripe treasure
Breathing its intoxicating fragrance
My tongue softly
flicks at the
blushing bud
I feel the heat upon my cheek
An exquisite
scent from the hot moist flesh
Throbbing now with
anticipation
I part this trembling fruit
My lips and these now moist
and flowing
Knowing their union is near
My searing tongue diving deeply
Voraciously searching this fruits sweet pink flesh
Devouring inside and
out
I drink deeply the nectar that freely flows
Swallowing all that I
am given
As the writhing subsides
In breathless ecstasy this fruit and
I drained
Delicious honey on my lips
And the hot seed I have spilled
Jc062601
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Overall Rank: 1738
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST
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