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Succulent Fruit (Free verse) by Jody Conn

Gazing at this succulent fruit My breath gently caressing this swollen ripe treasure Breathing its intoxicating fragrance My tongue softly flicks at the blushing bud I feel the heat upon my cheek An exquisite scent from the hot moist flesh Throbbing now with anticipation I part this trembling fruit My lips and these now moist and flowing Knowing their union is near My searing tongue diving deeply Voraciously searching this fruits sweet pink flesh Devouring inside and out I drink deeply the nectar that freely flows Swallowing all that I am given As the writhing subsides In breathless ecstasy this fruit and I drained Delicious honey on my lips And the hot seed I have spilled Jc062601

shwenatjadeflower 12-Jul-02/11:59 AM
very hot i like the double meanings




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