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My daughter found at the age of 28 (Free verse) by Jill Stockinger Feathered over lightly
with dreams of
belonging
Folding the three of us
into a nest
of time
Holding us
together
in the always
The DNA beating
true
through the veins of our lives
Genetic puzzles locking and
unlocking
Forging the chain
on which love
unfolds
Identity forms
tied
to traits
unexpectedly manifest
Heredity the key
Questions
leading the
way.
Up the ladder:
Corner of 30th and Tibbs
Down the ladder:
Shadow
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Posted: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:17 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.8218703 Overall Rank: 10836 Comments:
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I like the images, "DNA beating true", linking DNA and love. Not sure how the title fits.
It falters with the genetics, but this is quite good anyway. Perhaps Genome instead of DNA?
I would just love to be say how great this is. But that would be a lie. It hits rock bottom in all senses except pretentiousness.
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
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