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Shadow (Free verse) by talking_goldfish
the wall is but a world on which the shadow lives and all the world around awaits its next command puppets to the darkness mere pawns in one great plan and all the world around controlled by shadows dark living life in doubt a trick a joke a game and all the world around ignores this simple fact what we fail to see is that we are merely tools and all world around is just another shadow

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10837
Posted: August 12, 2002 4:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 4:41 PM PDT
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[5] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 18-Apr-03/12:45 PM | Reply
I like how you stick to one subject but this isn't all that great. -5-
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