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Shadow (Free verse) by talking_goldfish
the wall is but a world
on which the shadow lives
and all the world around
awaits its next command
puppets to the darkness
mere pawns in one great plan
and all the world around
controlled by shadows dark
living life in doubt
a trick a joke a game
and all the world around
ignores this simple fact
what we fail to see
is that we are merely tools
and all world around
is just another shadow
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10837
Posted: August 12, 2002 4:41 PM PDT; Last modified: August 12, 2002 4:41 PM PDT
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