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bipolar (Pimple) by nentwined
the inner tissue of my soul is full of life and hope, but periodically it sloughs away and leaves me barren.

Up the ladder: The First Poem
Down the ladder: Dying Abroad

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Overall Rank: 11
Posted: April 10, 2004 2:58 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2004 2:58 PM PDT
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[9] deleted user @ 68.66.196.168 | 10-Apr-04/6:50 PM | Reply
If you mean bipolar disease, which it seems you do, then Amen, Good description! I would call this free verse.
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > deleted user | 10-Apr-04/7:29 PM | Reply
That's what I was aiming for, but it felt too angsty and odd to be "real" poetry. But ... la. :) the "inner tissue of my soul" inspired the poem--saw it in another piece on here and had to do _something_ with it. Thanks for the vote of confidence. :)
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 10-Apr-04/8:01 PM | Reply
interesting parallels between this and a menstrual cycle.
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > Shuushin | 10-Apr-04/10:13 PM | Reply
That's basically all it had going for it. :)
[9] Nateislate @ 147.226.174.25 | 11-Apr-04/10:59 AM | Reply
Do bipolar people exhibit this type of balance and introspection? Nice poem, just wondering if 3rd person would be more appropriate.
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > Nateislate | 11-Apr-04/11:27 AM | Reply
On a good day, I think. :)
[0] deleted user @ 195.194.75.209 | 16-Jan-07/10:53 AM | Reply
Illiterate shit
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.206.184 | 25-Feb-07/6:51 PM | Reply
you californian cunt. this is cuntsquirt.
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