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bipolar

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 10 Apr 2004 · 8 comments

the inner tissue of my soul is full of life and hope, but periodically it sloughs away and leaves me barren.

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[9] deleted user 10-Apr-04/6:50 PM Reply
If you mean bipolar disease, which it seems you do, then Amen, Good description! I would call this free verse.
[n/a] nentwined › deleted user 10-Apr-04/7:29 PM Reply
That's what I was aiming for, but it felt too angsty and odd to be "real" poetry. But ... la. :) the "inner tissue of my soul" inspired the poem--saw it in another piece on here and had to do _something_ with it. Thanks for the vote of confidence. :)
[8] Shuushin 10-Apr-04/8:01 PM Reply
interesting parallels between this and a menstrual cycle.
[n/a] nentwined › Shuushin 10-Apr-04/10:13 PM Reply
That's basically all it had going for it. :)
[9] Nateislate 11-Apr-04/10:59 AM Reply
Do bipolar people exhibit this type of balance and introspection? Nice poem, just wondering if 3rd person would be more appropriate.
[n/a] nentwined › Nateislate 11-Apr-04/11:27 AM Reply
On a good day, I think. :)
[0] deleted user 16-Jan-07/10:53 AM Reply
Illiterate shit
[0] mr cunt 25-Feb-07/6:51 PM Reply
you californian cunt. this is cuntsquirt.