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selfhood, through extrospection (Free verse) by nentwined
Alien fork, I; oral knife, I; I fear no ilk, rake in foil. Linker of AI. Ear fink oil. Ear foil ink. Ear foil kin. Rifle in oak, filer in oak, flier in oak. Flake in Rio, flakier ion. Feral, I oink.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.105263
Weighted score: 7.0054193
Overall Rank: 246
Posted: May 10, 2004 7:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2004 7:21 PM PDT
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[8] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 10-May-04/7:28 PM | Reply
-8- Because introspection is so very overrated.
[8] <~> @ 69.0.38.136 | 10-May-04/8:00 PM | Reply
nice. now it all comes clear.

alles ist klar.
[6] sliver @ 65.178.192.168 | 10-May-04/8:43 PM | Reply
Whatcha on? share?
[n/a] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 > sliver | 10-May-04/8:56 PM | Reply
kaolin fire.
[9] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.116.68 | 11-May-04/5:45 AM | Reply
I have no clue what this means other than the closing line. Still, I like it's originality. Particularly the beat.
[10] Jill Stockinger @ 67.172.190.253 | 15-Jan-07/7:10 PM | Reply
And so you are! Kaolin Fire!
[0] deleted user @ 195.194.75.209 | 16-Jan-07/10:59 AM | Reply
This made me puke
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.205.209 | 25-Feb-07/6:19 PM | Reply
Total bollox. You are clearly a cunt, even cuntier than than moron cunt Rockmage.
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