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Window Washer (midtown) (Free verse) by ecargo
Like wind, he swirls clouds, whorls of froth obscuring mirrored towers flows Twyla-lithe and light his mop a prop interprets galaxies elegant ellipses on a blank pane makes a dance of the mundane.

Up the ladder: Buried pyramid
Down the ladder: Diary entry (edit)

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.5
Weighted score: 6.2102365
Overall Rank: 977
Posted: January 10, 2006 3:11 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2006 3:11 PM PST
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[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 64.222.209.137 | 10-Jan-06/8:06 PM | Reply
mission accomplished- you made a mundane subject into a dance
[9] Dovina @ 17.255.240.6 | 11-Jan-06/2:08 PM | Reply
I saw a flagman once who made a dance of the mundane. It's inspiring - the window washer and your poem.
[n/a] Dental Panic @ 84.27.6.94 | 13-Jan-06/10:15 AM | Reply
Very nice poem.
[10] Jill Stockinger @ 67.172.190.253 | 15-Jan-07/8:26 PM | Reply
very lyrical
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