poemranker ::Window Washer (midtown) by ecargo

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Free verse № 136750

Window Washer (midtown)

by ecargo

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Jan 2006 · 4 comments

Like wind, he swirls clouds, whorls of froth obscuring mirrored towers flows Twyla-lithe and light his mop a prop interprets galaxies elegant ellipses on a blank pane makes a dance of the mundane.

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[9] http://mulberryfairy 10-Jan-06/8:06 PM Reply
mission accomplished- you made a mundane subject into a dance
[9] Dovina 11-Jan-06/2:08 PM Reply
I saw a flagman once who made a dance of the mundane. It's inspiring - the window washer and your poem.
[n/a] Dental Panic 13-Jan-06/10:15 AM Reply
Very nice poem.
[10] Jill Stockinger 15-Jan-07/8:26 PM Reply
very lyrical