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I heart you (Free verse) by thetrev
There are words on the fridge,
Theyâre magnetic.
âI liver you, with all my lungs.â
âJanuary breaks 50% offâ¦ââ
There are pictures of cats, newspaper cuttings
with words and letters blacked out.
âI stomach you, I do, but I donât brain you. Lets skin. And glove
your holesâ.
âSweet, sharp, sophisticated and fullâ¦â
No melon, no lemon,
the fridge door has lost its suction, the light stays on.
(Pictured above, dancing).
There is inside, next to the peppered cheese,
a gaudy matrioshka.
(Despot daughter a mini-dictator).
There is on her face a black
moustache; it might as easily
be snot, or a spot.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3375
Posted: January 16, 2007 9:11 AM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2007 9:11 AM PST
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