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Dancing for dinner (Free verse) by fevriere
What am I in your courts, but under your spell? I will twist in your cauldron and jingle my bells! I will turn wheels and crack open day, kick out the sun's yolk and make meringue clouds, and when you roll away, still bleary-eyed and clasp-handed, I will spring away and fall back! I will whip like winter on your window. I will give you blossom snowshowers I will offer you starry daffodils I will hand you twinkling snowdrops but you only care for narcissi and hemlock. For want of a breadcrust smile, I will light the fuse on my brightest tricks and blow sky high.

Up the ladder: Waffleman
Down the ladder: Game Over

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3377
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 4, 2005 11:34 AM PDT
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[10] Ranger @ 86.131.51.9 | 8-Mar-07/2:04 AM | Reply
Top drawer stuff.
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