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Leap!

Member since 2001 · Posted 1 Dec 2003 · 12 comments

As I leapfrog from One thought to another- From embrace to negation To new contradiction- Will I be judged Badly for this? Am I reaching for Something higher Not contained in concrete facts Or marshalled numbers? I do not know Except for this: To live I must continue Leaping!

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12 comments

[8] richa 1-Dec-03/2:11 PM Reply

Reads well, each line a small packaged thought.

I must continue leaping is a fairly weak end though.

Not sure if I would call it concrete either

[7] horus8 1-Dec-03/2:19 PM Reply

That's a beautiful picture of you leaping, really, pretty... Now here, let me point you towards the window. 7

[n/a] deleted user 1-Dec-03/2:54 PM Reply

You should leap into a good poem.

[10] kingit 1-Dec-03/9:27 PM Reply

nice clear thought-line...finally. acquiesced with a 10!

[0] Edna Sweetlove 16-Jan-07/4:49 AM Reply

Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:15 PM Reply

This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts.

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM Reply

This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM Reply

This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM Reply

This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM Reply

I think I have a low opinion of you and Rocky-poo.

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM Reply

This scribble is shite.

[0] mr cunt 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM Reply

Fuck off.