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Leap! (Concrete) by Jill Stockinger As I leapfrog from
One thought to another-
From embrace to negation
To new contradiction-
Will I be judged
Badly for this?
Am I reaching for
Something higher
Not contained in concrete facts
Or marshalled numbers?
I do not know
Except for this:
To live
I must continue
Leaping!
Up the ladder:
R.I.P "He was the bestest poet ever."
Down the ladder:
Ghosts of years (rhymey edit)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.125
Posted: December 1, 2003 12:57 PM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2003 12:57 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.9908967 Overall Rank: 1320 Comments:
That's a beautiful picture of you leaping, really, pretty... Now here, let me point you towards the window. 7
You should leap into a good poem.
nice clear thought-line...finally. acquiesced with a 10!
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts.
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
I think I have a low opinion of you and Rocky-poo.
This scribble is shite.
Fuck off.
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I must continue leaping is a fairly weak end though.
Not sure if I would call it concrete either