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Leap! (Concrete) by Jill Stockinger
As I leapfrog from One thought to another- From embrace to negation To new contradiction- Will I be judged Badly for this? Am I reaching for Something higher Not contained in concrete facts Or marshalled numbers? I do not know Except for this: To live I must continue Leaping!

Up the ladder: The Better of the Sea
Down the ladder: Summing Up

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5333333
Weighted score: 6.3505554
Overall Rank: 818
Posted: December 1, 2003 12:57 PM PST; Last modified: December 1, 2003 12:57 PM PST
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[8] richa @ 81.178.255.219 | 1-Dec-03/2:11 PM | Reply
Reads well, each line a small packaged thought.

I must continue leaping is a fairly weak end though.

Not sure if I would call it concrete either
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 | 1-Dec-03/2:19 PM | Reply
That's a beautiful picture of you leaping, really, pretty... Now here, let me point you towards the window. 7
[n/a] deleted user @ 24.222.81.233 | 1-Dec-03/2:54 PM | Reply
You should leap into a good poem.
[10] kingit @ 67.69.63.83 | 1-Dec-03/9:27 PM | Reply
nice clear thought-line...finally. acquiesced with a 10!
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.224.198 | 16-Jan-07/4:49 AM | Reply
Nearly as badly written as something by Rockmage. In short, terrible.
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:15 PM | Reply
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts.
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM | Reply
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM | Reply
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:17 PM | Reply
This poem shows you and ROCKMAGE (same person) are cunts, total and utter cunts
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM | Reply
I think I have a low opinion of you and Rocky-poo.
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM | Reply
This scribble is shite.
[0] mr cunt @ 85.210.255.94 | 27-Feb-07/5:18 PM | Reply
Fuck off.
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