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Reap (Free verse) by ecargo
In this hollow, a bird-beat; thin ribbon pulses red as harvest, red as heat. Sickle cleaves sky, time, tide: an egg, an eye. Dust haze wavers, lays its wreathe on husks, cracked tamarisk where night wraiths feed. We wait the dead hours, sickle cleaves sky, knife-edged, wandering beneath red eye.

Up the ladder: Why Do We Stay?
Down the ladder: Duff firs, Nawal

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.666667
Weighted score: 5.9861183
Overall Rank: 1324
Posted: January 15, 2006 9:49 PM PST; Last modified: January 15, 2006 10:08 PM PST
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[6] Dovina @ 209.247.222.94 | 16-Jan-06/6:10 AM | Reply
I see a rural harvest time in a hollow, but miss the point, if it's more than that.
[n/a] ecargo @ 172.159.125.225 > Dovina | 16-Jan-06/5:32 PM | Reply
More mood than meaning.
[9] zodiac @ 209.193.14.154 | 17-Jan-06/10:14 AM | Reply
This is really great, biteme. My only suggestion: wreathe should be wreath.
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