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Leap! (Concrete) by Jill Stockinger

As I leapfrog from One thought to another- From embrace to negation To new contradiction- Will I be judged Badly for this? Am I reaching for Something higher Not contained in concrete facts Or marshalled numbers? I do not know Except for this: To live I must continue Leaping!

richa 1-Dec-03/2:11 PM
Reads well, each line a small packaged thought.

I must continue leaping is a fairly weak end though.

Not sure if I would call it concrete either




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