There you go again.

illiterate horse dung.

utter trash. I have shat a better poem.

dreary rubbish.

Is this bad intentionally or are you just a moron?

Its a nice idea but ends in being an okay-okay poem.

Beautiful.... This got straight to my heart.

Somehow I get the feeling of being in a cemetary.

Have I read this before? Probably. In someone else's obituary perhaps!

This is a good. .................And to see that none have voted here yet?

Why not come and give 10/10 to MY poems for a sodding change?

I love bumming! I used to bum so many people until my willy fell off.

Garbage. But semi-intelligent garbage. I shall be generous and score it 1/10.

Cool. Whether real or not, the choice of topic is good. It's like you've put a story to it. Great job.

This rather cleverly combines stupidity, illiteracy and total lack of humour. Since I am in a good humour and feeling generous, I shall rate it 1/10.

I fell that this could be an excerpt from a story. somehow it gives me an eerie feeling. I don't particularly like death themes esp when settled around brutality.

Looks like you're a loser at love that you're poems are written to beckon someone in particular. It doesn't seem that you've got her. (No offence meant).

A nice title. And a good read. But there seems to be no consistencey in time and metre and its as if some lines are like chewing gum. They've been pulled and stretched.

This is really excellent. I remember a visit to Bangkok and I found out why the city is so called. I got shagged silly for fewer baht than in a fahrt.

I have only had full anal sex in a cinema twice. It meant I missed the funny death scene in "Love Story" but you can't see much when your head is stuck between the seats in front of you can you?