Be The One (Free verse) by forsaken
I just went for a walk to clear my mind
But clearity wasn't something that I could find
I know that you already have a man
But he just can't treat you like I can
I hear your cry out for help with every look into your eyes
And it's just not right for you stay with someone who laughs at you when
you cry
I say you love him cause there was no one there who cared for you
Well I'm writing this to let you know that I do
I'm not saying this trying to convince you to be my girl
But I'm hoping it opens your eyes cause you can do so much better in
this world
If you did ever get the thought of giving me the chance
Then know this I'd do all I can to make your heart dance
To keep it floating in the air
and show you everyday that I care
I'd never let it touch the ground
Or give you a reason not to want me around
To show you what love really is like
Then the tallest moutain I would hike
If you were at it's peak
Just for that one chance we could speak
I'd do anything for that one moment of conversation
So I could fully explain to you my affection
For you the most beautiful soul I could ever see
If there was just something I could do so you would look at me
The same way I look at you
Then that thing I surely would do
Cause when I lay my head down to go to sleep
You're always the last thing on my mind and first after the alarm beeps
I ain't feeding you full of lies
I've just been bewitched by your eyes
As if your beauty as me under a spell
Cause all the good what was in my past I'm willing to sell
Just for the honor of starting it over one day with you
So you could know my devotion for you is true
And I mean it when I say
All I want to do is make your pain go away
I know of how you hurt deep within
Well I want to remove it from underneath your skin
So you don't have to know so much pain inside
What could it hurt to spend one day by myside
I'm not the type of guy
To make a woman cry
So I'm trying to undertand
How you can stand by your man
When all I want to do
Is be the one for you
Who lets you know how it feels
When someone's love for you is real
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9428573
Weighted score: 6.9422054
Overall Rank: 176
Posted: June 8, 2006 5:05 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2006 5:05 PM PDT
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