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Mirage (v2) (Free verse) by nentwined
Great things lie beyond the horizon --
I've seen them.
Dreams ride me
beyond the confines of the open road,
this highway that divides desert
into desolation and despair.
Asphalt has taught me pain while the sky
has taught me fear.
My life leans beside me -- engine steaming,
kickstand low;
chrome dissolves in motley parade, oil drips onto the
road.
Starting stutters it to, again, a stop.
The machine is wheezing.
There is beauty in the sunset, rays reflected in the clouds.
A light
shower massages the day's pains.
The sunset cools. The shower darkens.
I wrap myself in a blanket of bitterness.
Great things lie beyond the
horizon --
I've seen them. In dreams.
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Weighted score: 6.942029
Overall Rank: 177
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:19 AM PST
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