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If I Had (Free verse) by forsaken
If I had the strength to you tell how I really feel How for one sweet embrace my soul to to the devil I'd deal I've seen a million faces in my lifetime But yours is the only one I've wanted beside mine If I had what it took to love you Then I wouldn't have to fight with myself over what to do To Tell you everything I feel for you inside Or save my pride by allowing them to still hide If I had never laid my eyes upon yours I would have ever known the feeling of when a heart soars Or how easy a broken heart can be hinden behind a beautiful smile If I could heal it for you then I'd walk any amount of miles If I had not such a weak heart Then I would like to have yours cause I would ever let it come apart As it is now I find that I dream about this when I sleep at night Just one time when I awoken would I like to see the same beautiful sight If I had the chance to relive my life again till today Then I'd do it all the same so the way it is would stay Cause I wouldn't want to take the chance of not meeting you I'd give anything to know you felt this way too

Down the ladder: A heart without keys

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9
Weighted score: 6.898269
Overall Rank: 245
Posted: June 8, 2006 5:05 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2006 5:05 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] amanda_dcosta @ 202.164.137.248 | 18-Jun-06/11:21 PM | Reply
There you go again.
[9] misused @ 75.34.103.105 | 3-Apr-08/8:32 PM | Reply
your so talented
[n/a] forsaken @ 118.128.20.251 > misused | 4-Apr-08/1:56 AM | Reply
Thanks, I liked yours. It reminds me of things I once and well sometimes still do feel. I know you don't know me, but I try my best to help people. I guess you could say I feel I need to make up for my past, so if you ever want someone to talk to who's gone through alot and you'll ever have to meet. You can always hit me up on myspace, my address his on my page here.
[9] Sigh'ense... @ 69.225.133.126 | 17-Jan-09/9:25 PM | Reply
sappy, fresh and sticky
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