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killer boredom butterfly (esoteric)

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 17 Dec 2002 · 7 comments

there wasn't much to do that day ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day ... ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day ... ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.

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7 comments

[10] <~> 17-Dec-02/8:19 AM Reply
damn. damn, damn damn. have a 10, for being so damn zen.
[n/a] nentwined › <~> 17-Dec-02/8:26 AM Reply
:rofl: thank you. it's funny, I just made the couplet, then filled in the dots to see where lines were supposed to be, to try and understand the poem form, and... well... :)
[10] Fetylum 17-Dec-02/5:11 PM Reply
Rings along nicely with your other poem...like a chorus line o.O
Great...now this is stuck in my head XP
[n/a] nentwined › Fetylum 17-Dec-02/8:08 PM Reply
hard to get the "..."'s out of your head? :)
[8] New Life Drug 17-Dec-02/5:43 PM Reply
esoteric? hardly. 8.
[n/a] horus8 10-Dec-03/5:33 PM Reply
Wrapping paper also works for giant colorul origamy.
[9] PoeticXTC 14-Jan-06/6:08 PM Reply
lmao!!!!!!!!!