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killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) (Villanelle) by nentwined

there wasn't much to do that day ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day ... ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day ... ... my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away ... ... there wasn't much to do that day my mind a butterfly, it fluttered away.

Fetylum 17-Dec-02/5:11 PM
Rings along nicely with your other poem...like a chorus line o.O
Great...now this is stuck in my head XP




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