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Niggers Don't Write Poetry (Free verse) by pain killer some people think that
niggers don't write poetry
some people think that
using the word "nigger" gives them an edge
endows (oh my word) them with cred
the very essence of blackness
look at me i'm dangerous
no you're not you're axle rose
and you're SHIT
Up the ladder:
European Pentameter
Down the ladder:
Farewell Song
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4166667
Posted: June 22, 2004 12:48 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 12:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.8424907 Overall Rank: 13470 Comments:
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pain killer @ 217.159.74.253
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22-Jun-04/12:49 PM
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TEN!
'cred'? that's a stretch , isn't it? You are the epitome of mediocrity. The Beige Knave, would be a fitting monicker.
the "big" knave....why thank you god's wife, you DO know me after all
i shall call you the crimson spade...seeing as you are on a permanent period and all that...actually i take it back...the crimson spade is far too dramatic for one so, so dull...sniff
this a true poem i love it and its so true and all but they can write poems good like this one is awsome
thanx i seen you liked my poem thanx alot ur sweet but holla i gotta bounce up out of this peace
PE@CE OUT
thank yew jessicagurl yew are sweet also and i'm glad you like my modest little ditty,(gosh i nearly said deity then, whatever came over me...and no it wasn't you zodiac...oh you wish big boy) wherever i can spread a little enlightenment and pleasure i shalll be happy to point and spray my sprinkler of big and clever words, no that's not me that's little billy mac zodiac@wibble.com...sorry...but yeh jess babe, thanks
BOLB BLOBBY 8/10
Who are these people? Why would using the word "nigger" give them "cred"? I'll give you a 3 because I'm intrigued, but you're going to have to explain more if you want a good vote.
Now you have something in common with niggers besides that gold-tooth and cocked cap.
Axle Rose rocked, before the weave and beads.
Both of you have misspelled Axl.
You're the most middling load of bollocks ever.
PS-The word 'nigger' is slightly offensive and hardly ever appears on poemranker. Are you sure you didn't mean 'Negro', which is 10x more ace?
PPS-Your obsession with me is gay to the max. I do wish you'd stop, or at least stop spelling my name ludicrous ways like 'zodiav'.
PPPS-I don't imagine you will, as you've proven yourself here to be a gay of the highest magnitude.
You have turded all over your anti-gaye rant by replying to yourself a number of times - this has created an elongated stool of comments which has destroyed the ultimate thread of your commentary. Which I believe is:
(Negro ^ Bulging Hard On) + Gay _______________________________ - Nigger = Painkiller Guff
Or else:
((Construct a codpiece out of cod) + (Scream until everyone has left the room))^(an entire hopelessly-gay lifetime)
If someone was obsessively attacking -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. I wouldn't want them to stop. Why do you want pain killer to stop? Is he hurting your feelings?
I quite agree!You and your poetry are actualized shit.I understand the jest of your statement,but that's
no excuse to lower yourself to the same level.Besides I highly doubt you know anything about the essence of blackness, being the pasty scotsman you are.Good job jackass you created nine lines of artless, barbarous shit.
So you didn't have the bollix to stand up to jack macwibble@zodiac.com and you've joined the lets gang up on pain killer bandwagon...you nearly creamned yourself when zodiac damned you with faint praise...what's up...you scared of him and his big wordy stick?...and Doug...your poetry is shite it keeps me up all night...and guess what...the big boys, you know, the regulars who sup at the poemrankers arms (real ale only) still don't like you...now THAT'S ironic...oh yeh i nearly forgot...irony is a concept yanks just can't get their heads around...(aint that true God's wifey) Doug...very poor
I like the way you lurch around gushing about irony, even though every time you make an "ironic" comment you carefully explain why you think it's ironic. You are an idiot of the first class.
P.S. There is no "bandwagon" to "gang up" on you. Everyone independently thinks you're a cock.
My balls are small, my words are slight,
I nearly creamed with zoddie's delight. Painkiller,fuck you,fuck Zodiac,Fuck Horus8(gay),fuck poemstanker,and a big, triple larger than life fuck you to godswife.So kiss my American ass you defeated Scotch and as long as your there, please lick my hangin American crotch!
Is this your leaving rant?
Get the hose Marge, them pasty Scotsmen done got in the trash again.
whats the point
hmmm...lots of wibbles and a fair old bit of honking going on here
in writing about niggers i'm referring to people like tarantino whose liberal sprinkling of the word "nigger" in his movies caused samual jackson who is black and starred in pulp fiction to question tarantino's motives...it appears tarantino was aiming for that all important essence of the street..tarantino is known to be a real "fan boy" i'm also calling the shots on horus8 whi is basically an unreconstructed twat and by the way...pain killer is kind of dark skinned himself coming from mixed race parentage and so has a divine right to write things like "niggers don't write poetry" pain killr is not gay but he will let gordon zodiac@wibble.com rim him if he asks nicely
Fair affirmation pain killer, we'll accept your rendition.
Your much more plausible than the homophobic mixture of M&M and Greg Brady called horus8 or jerimi handjobolis or Indiana Jones and the fucking temple of nice hotel rooms.jerimi is so suburban he makes my great uncle from Topeka look ghetto.Jerimi if I ever see you in my neighborhood I'll kick you to sleep!I'll give you my address if you feel the need, you wished for fish story of lower- middle class America!Your a complete and utter fraud,you know as much about poverty and death as I know of gated developments and Orange County,CA.You and your dad in a high speed chase,yeah right...a high speed chase to the Target to get your mom some tampons you fuckin' poser!Please stop posting your puerile attempts at urban poetry on scarce web space you arcadian jackass.
All of these accusations and more have already been leveled at Jeremi dozens of times, to no great effect. His usual response, 'I'm the Supergay Ultrachrist', never fails to baffle us right off our divans.
If you wrote this in negrese it would better convey that this poeme is about some negro (you) slagging of 'honkies' for misappropriating his 'culture'. Which would be incredibly deep.
Also it is axl rose. There is an easy anagram to help you remember for goodness sake.
he's back...the black man's back...i'm a cock am i...that's nice to know since you dark angel are a fanny of the first order so we go together like sausage and bacon...a dripping, wibbling fanny...so all i have to say on this matter...and i'm not being ironic here but you are right..i find myself having to explain my attempts at irony every time...but well, the yanks among you just don't get it...i mean this is the nation that thought shouting "NORM" was even remotely funny...ah fuck it i've lost the run of myself altogether
NORM!
To Mr pain killer
Contrary to some's held belief, poemranker is not made up one person with many different user names. As a result replying to for instance a richa and calling it a dark_angel is frowned upon. Yours Luther Blissett.
Oh, "frowned upon" is it? Yes. Frowned. Thanks ever so much for pointing that out.
That is ok, are you Luther Blissett?
utter trash. I have shat a better poem.
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