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Farewell Song (Free verse) by jaalko I thought my love a rose
A beautiful scent, so sweet
I thought my love a rainbow
Where all the colors meet
I thought my love would never die
But it seems I'm always wrong
I heard aphrodite cry
And heard her farewell song.
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Grampa's Proverb
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Posted: May 10, 2002 8:49 AM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2002 8:49 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.8357427 Overall Rank: 13471 Comments:
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-=SeTTle=- @ 63.214.120.121
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10-Jul-02/2:41 PM
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*slobbering noises for six hourse in the room nextdoor while you try to sleep*
Crap. Total crap. Crap. Crap. Complete god damned crap. My Christ this is some of the worst crap I've ever seen crapped. God in Heaven how did you come up with some crap? Serious fucking crap. Crap. How crap is this? Crap. Crap. Really quite crap. And it's crap.
Wasn't this already written? There is one thing to put it into an allusion, but this is down right theft - my love is a red, red rose.
I think this has been judged unfairly. If you're strict on your plagiarism thing, the Waste Land is all stolen, and that's the greatest poem ever.
I think you're right, this is by far not the worst thing on poemranker.
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