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Farewell Song (Free verse) by jaalko

I thought my love a rose A beautiful scent, so sweet I thought my love a rainbow Where all the colors meet I thought my love would never die But it seems I'm always wrong I heard aphrodite cry And heard her farewell song.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Jul-02/7:00 PM
Crap. Total crap. Crap. Crap. Complete god damned crap. My Christ this is some of the worst crap I've ever seen crapped. God in Heaven how did you come up with some crap? Serious fucking crap. Crap. How crap is this? Crap. Crap. Really quite crap. And it's crap.




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