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Free verse № 40446

Mastermind

by wOrnella Mutiw

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Feb 2003 · Edited 15 Feb 2003 · 7 comments

Oceans away in a matchbox brilliance resides. -forgotten- -bastardized- Cornered in a nut house. A scitzophrenic writes prescriptions, and the leukimia patient dies. His momma yells........ As his daddy whips out the belt. With Bible tightly gripped Reciting scriptures mixed with Black Sabbath Angel Head.

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7 comments

[4] AmberNicole 15-Feb-03/9:09 PM Reply

Um....intersting.

[7] Blue Magpie 15-Feb-03/10:19 PM Reply

Hi,
1 spelling error 'schizophrenic' I liked the beginning, and understand now why you liked Parting th Curtain, I didn't find the connection, or else you took a sharp turn, at His Momma....
nice though. I really liked the beginning.

[n/a] wOrnella Mutiw › Blue Magpie 15-Feb-03/10:29 PM Reply

His momma yells.....refers to his childhood of when he was severly abused. It's taking the story of a schizophrenic from the now to his childhood....the progression of the disease.

[6] Fear of Garbage 15-Feb-03/10:41 PM Reply

it was ok...no strong feelings though

[n/a] daniella 21-May-03/5:43 PM Reply

why have you won the poemwanker award?

[n/a] horus8 24-Jul-03/1:37 PM Reply

Hi, my name is horus8, you must be, Stupid. It has been a pleasure, but in the end I believe we all know who the true mastermind was, and in the words of Alexander the Great " All that way for this <wipes his sword of blood>...Oh, well, I suppose We're rich now, let's eat."

[1] Edna Sweetlove 18-Jun-06/5:41 PM Reply

This rather cleverly combines stupidity, illiteracy and total lack of humour. Since I am in a good humour and feeling generous, I shall rate it 1/10.