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InWonderLand on Left the key in dream den's door by capachijim 3 Nov 2006, 8:11 PM
i LIKE THIS SHIT ALOT!
Ranger on For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco 4 Nov 2006, 8:28 AM
Reads well, sounds better :-)
INTRANSIT on 311006 txt to russia by daniella 3 Nov 2006, 6:42 AM
Just -Text to russia- would work. I'd go with less nature oriented scheme. New end: You unfold me in the morning. This could see a ten easy.
Engelbert Humpalot on Tony Blair's sagging purple johnny by Stephen Robins 3 Nov 2006, 5:22 AM
Who's VioletSuede, Stevie?
Engelbert Humpalot on some deleted poem 3 Nov 2006, 5:20 AM
This is one of your better efforts. I have been to Australia which is a beautiful country inhabited by a load of twats plus the orientals and the abos. Only the British could have hit on the delicious irony of shipping their convicts to such a nice place.
Sasha on So Easy by InWonderLand 5 Nov 2006, 8:07 PM
This poem doesen't hold any water. I have nothing to sink my teeth into; only a dim, colorless confessional atmosphere that is totally out of place. Give me some life!
INTRANSIT on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina 3 Nov 2006, 6:31 AM
I'd like to know what this assholes problem is. (the driver of the car) And it's too wordy for my tastes. This one could do away with the formal stanzas. Say, what other poetry sites are y'all using these days? What is working for who and why.
INTRANSIT on Poem for Mahmuth by Dental Panic 3 Nov 2006, 6:36 AM
Shit. I liked the sadder wiser beers. Fuck. Has everyone out-read me here, too? Love the sounds. If it matters 10.
some deleted user on Toe Jam Poem by EDNA by Edna Sweetlove 5 Nov 2006, 12:56 PM
ummm, did you see my poem, more suck than blow?? ummm, never mind...if i get a straw, i can do a juice extraction number, and save all the crusty bits for later. now then sweety...do tell me bout budapest!
Ranger on The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina 3 Nov 2006, 9:51 AM
Nicely iambic for the most part. Is this from a film?
Dovina on Footsteps by MacFrantic 3 Nov 2006, 1:17 PM
The sound is poetry. Maybe that's all that matters.
Dovina on heyyyyyy alligator by hottttwindnie 3 Nov 2006, 1:18 PM
"rhyming is hard" - Wrong!
Engelbert Humpalot on Ash by horus8 3 Nov 2006, 5:11 AM
Badly punctuated. Badly written. Crap in short.
Engelbert Humpalot on Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20 3 Nov 2006, 5:14 AM
I am pleased I missed the previous version(s) - they must have sucked bigtime!
Engelbert Humpalot on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom 3 Nov 2006, 5:15 AM
Puerile.
Engelbert Humpalot on some deleted poem 3 Nov 2006, 5:16 AM
Potential.
Engelbert Humpalot on Don't touch the chairs in a gay bar. by Stephen Robins 3 Nov 2006, 5:17 AM
This is excellent. Why was his stool hanging out? Had you answered that I would say 10/10. As it is it has to be an 8/10.
Engelbert Humpalot on some deleted poem 3 Nov 2006, 5:18 AM
You poems range from the realy excellent to the really crap. Guess which this one is. 1/10
Ranger on some deleted poem 4 Nov 2006, 8:37 AM
There's some nice wordplay in here - fluent/fluid (embalmed), and 'wisens' works well with its double meaning. 'Carpet' may be a little too modern for the more historical language, or it might just be my nitpicking. I like it, but there's something nagging at me - I'll come back to this later and see if I can work out what it is.
Ranger on some deleted poem 6 Nov 2006, 9:45 AM
You're bored, aren't you?