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311006 txt to russia

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Oct 2006 · 6 comments

i am the silent voice that speaks to you in thunder that rolls in on waves of vast oceans, across deserts, rising with tides to unfold you in the morning.

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[8] half.italian 31-Oct-06/3:02 AM Reply

I like this very much. Although the form seems to beg to be rid of line three and four, and replaced with 'rolling across deserts'. You are very close. The title sucks. I love numbers, but they are for math.

[8] Dovina 31-Oct-06/10:50 AM Reply

Yes, I have been spoken to by such voices. A less cryptic title might dispell criticism.

[8] howl 1-Nov-06/2:52 AM Reply

A little unsubstantial. It has a well crafted order.

[8] wilco 2-Nov-06/6:27 PM Reply

I like this except for the title.

[8] INTRANSIT 3-Nov-06/6:42 AM Reply

Just -Text to russia- would work. I'd go with less nature oriented scheme.

New end: You unfold me in the morning. This could see a ten easy.

[n/a] daniella 20-May-07/8:22 PM Reply

i would edit it, but then lose all ur comments... so it stays as is. but thanx for the feedback!