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311006 txt to russia (Free verse) by daniella

i am the silent voice that speaks to you in thunder that rolls in on waves of vast oceans, across deserts, rising with tides to unfold you in the morning.

INTRANSIT 3-Nov-06/6:42 AM
Just -Text to russia- would work. I'd go with less nature oriented scheme.

New end: You unfold me in the morning. This could see a ten easy.




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