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311006 txt to russia (Free verse) by daniella

i am the silent voice that speaks to you in thunder that rolls in on waves of vast oceans, across deserts, rising with tides to unfold you in the morning.

half.italian 31-Oct-06/3:02 AM
I like this very much. Although the form seems to beg to be rid of line three and four, and replaced with 'rolling across deserts'. You are very close. The title sucks. I love numbers, but they are for math.




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