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sevenfourteenrobinson (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
i heard footfalls above when i tried to sleep, slipping into a dream i heard the feet moving and making the bed creak as i moved. i heard that too, the lights were out and above me, the footfalls fell falling and then i heard steps next to my bed on the floor next to me. creaking floor creaking, i sat straight up screaming. and running downstairs to my parents they said: "go back to bed, it's just your imagination." But i know it wasn't, i know it wasn't because i heard music too and somebody whispered... somebody died there. i just know it.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2951
Posted: October 14, 2003 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 10:26 AM PDT
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[10] wFraser Allonby Q.C.w @ 195.157.153.253 | 14-Oct-03/10:35 AM | Reply
PLEASE COMMENT ON MY POEMS
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 14-Oct-03/2:24 PM | Reply
PLEASE COMENT ON FRASER ALLONBY'S POEMS!
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 14-Oct-03/7:39 PM | Reply
"I see dead poems"

what did they whisper, what did they whisper??
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