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sevenfourteenrobinson (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
i heard footfalls above when i
tried to sleep, slipping
into a dream i heard the feet
moving and making
the bed creak as i moved.
i heard that too, the lights were out
and above me, the footfalls
fell falling and then i
heard steps next to my bed
on the floor next to me.
creaking floor creaking,
i sat straight up screaming.
and running downstairs to my parents
they said:
"go back to bed,
it's just your imagination."
But i know it wasn't,
i know it wasn't
because i heard music too
and somebody whispered...
somebody died there.
i just know it.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.4482355
Overall Rank: 2938
Posted: October 14, 2003 10:26 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 10:26 AM PDT
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