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So Easy (Lyric) by InWonderLand
I live two lives I have two sets of clothes Daytime, comfortable vans At night, uncomfortable stalettos. I work hard in one life To play harder in the next Both lives full of silent emotion Stuck in repeat until i learn to learn and pass lifes test. My real family is my relief from all this Some a distant member Most i know and truely admire For instance my grandparents are the best people to remember. Regardless, Late nights are full of phonecalls and friends I guess in sunlight my appearance is more beastly Its hard to know who you truely are When lieing to the world is So Easy.

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.6666666
Weighted score: 4.602657
Overall Rank: 12511
Posted: November 3, 2006 10:32 PM PST; Last modified: November 3, 2006 10:32 PM PST
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[5] Sasha @ 128.135.197.7 | 5-Nov-06/8:07 PM | Reply
This poem doesen't hold any water. I have nothing to sink my teeth into; only a dim, colorless confessional atmosphere that is totally out of place. Give me some life!
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