I think we treeists...fucking hilarious -0-

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Arborists, I think. And "we [treepeople]" Good rhyme with contraire. Nice title. Ever read "poison tree"?

I feel kind today. All poems get a 10.

Maybe I should read your poem before voting, but it's a bit too long.

And 10 again.

WHAT!!! No more oomph. I pity you, have a 10 as consolation.

Isn't it spelt "pegasus"?

I think you'll find the question is: Do you have what it takes to be worth helping?

I wrote this poem based on my life after becoming epileptic.to all the readers of this poem, please read it close i'm sure your have some interesting comments for me. Thank You JRODAY

been there before

a welcome epilogue of mr intransit, cool - likey !

Not so much to grab onto, a lot of abstracts. Like how it begins.

I think this is how a haiku should be written. The first image and then a different image (the blackbirds) linked to the first. Would leave out jealous though. Haikus are about imagery more than most other forms. Image without need for explanation.

picturesque, sentimental. i have a whole closet full of "those jeans". the ending promotes shiftlessness though, resulting from the "inability to satisfy".

If we dont look after our world who will?

you have a great way with words!

this poem started of great. then i didnt understand a word of it?

yer realy interesting! I had a fit reading it!!

A 10 simply for the title (and the poem's not bad either. Slayer does suck.