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WASTED

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Nov 2003 · Edited 21 Nov 2007 · 5 comments

At the far end of the World. Where the grass used to grow. Now the wind smells sweet and sour when it blows. and nothing lives there exept old crows. in the land that the SUPERPOWERS WASTED.

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5 comments

[3] ShaNoN+960317485 16-Nov-03/6:28 AM Reply
Frankly young crows 2 are found in this land:o(
[7] Shuushin 16-Nov-03/7:18 AM Reply
kindof a enviro-political pimple.

Reach a bit for those expressions, seek specificity like the good ones in that third line ("wind" could be better served though).

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as an aside - most people worry more about the second and third world folks than we who are hindered by bureacracy.
[n/a] titan69 17-May-04/1:10 PM Reply
If we dont look after our world who will?
[0] malpaso 21-Nov-07/5:22 PM Reply
shit!!!!
[n/a] titan69 › malpaso 22-Nov-07/12:16 PM Reply
copy cat !!!