| Re: Order My Book, And $4.00 Will Go To Killing A Pop Star by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
5-Jul-04/8:26 AM |
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that's it.. I'm buyin one
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| Re: Navy Pier by Doug |
18-Jun-04/9:24 PM |
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stoic? lilted breeze? final stanza is quite good
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| Re: What's Poetry by Sasha |
18-Jun-04/9:20 PM |
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i took a trip to detroit several years ago.
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
17-Jun-04/2:37 PM |
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brilliant, brilliant stuff here.
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| Re: Hiding by QuirkyWonder |
13-Jun-04/7:21 AM |
first half cliche...sort of public domain adage.
eventhough ? second half, powerless. average
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| Re: Untitled 48 by TLRufener |
13-Jun-04/7:15 AM |
silence calls straight to my soul?
and you couldn't even think of a title?
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| Re: Of Painting by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
11-Jun-04/6:02 AM |
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umm..think same as god lady. but i also think the poems should end on the word shit. I like the poem though...it is defiant and kinda funny.
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| Re: sweet kissing me there by misslexy |
11-Jun-04/5:59 AM |
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overdone. cut half of it.
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| Re: With Reckless Abandon by MacFrantic |
10-Jun-04/6:24 AM |
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everything above 3 and everything below, to infinity, is total bullshit. 10
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| Re: A short trip home by titan69 |
6-Jun-04/2:59 PM |
abraham lincoln with a curling iron
in his pants.
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| Re: love by francis nor capule |
4-Jun-04/3:26 PM |
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| Re: Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8 |
4-Jun-04/7:15 AM |
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| Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu |
3-Jun-04/6:27 AM |
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i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
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| Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus |
2-Jun-04/7:47 PM |
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and because no way does it deserve the one and the three...need a balance.
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| Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus |
2-Jun-04/7:46 PM |
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i wont say ugh, but i will say a bit verbose, and the fact that it was intentional doesnt make it any more the readable, sire. courtesy 8
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| Re: Heaven Out Here by wilco |
2-Jun-04/7:37 PM |
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| Re: STEP 4 by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/12:43 PM |
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would be much better without that last line...eek that is horrible.
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| Re: pie man by DR Limerick |
31-May-04/7:42 PM |
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i can only assume you are shooting to make the 20 worst board with this one, so -1-
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| Re: bel-air by DR Limerick |
31-May-04/7:39 PM |
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has everything a good limerick should have... lewdness, humor, and fucked up bel-air, mid-air rhyme...and it opens up with the conventional "there once was a man from.." perfect
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| Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-May-04/1:49 PM |
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by far the most profound poeme i have ever read...shear Genious...10
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