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bel-air (Limerick) by DR Limerick There once was a man from bel-air
who was shagging his girl on the stair
the banister broke
He doubled his stroke
and finished her off in mid-air.
Up the ladder:
Ducks With AIDs (a feeble attempt of something different)
Down the ladder:
For Gillian Park
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Posted: May 31, 2004 12:23 AM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2004 12:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5688 Comments:
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titan69 @ 62.31.28.189
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31-May-04/12:15 PM
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very funny not!
has everything a good limerick should have... lewdness, humor, and fucked up bel-air, mid-air rhyme...and it opens up with the conventional "there once was a man from.." perfect
Yes iam DR Limerick there will be more top limericks to come
stay toond !!!
Compared to most of the dreadful things here, this is good. But not exactly grammatical or accurately typed.
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