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What do u think i am! (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
What do u think i am!
i was born on an empty island
a deceitful pathway to empty noise
silent fingers running through my soul
do u think u know me
like a volcano flows rapidly
like when pteredactils roamed
the intense loudness awakenes
my black-laced fists
raining onto whoever stands
in my way
the feelings of joy encampuslate
my lost energy
starlit moons are my own heaven
the night is who i seek
the geeks shall enherent the earth
the birthright of the seven killjoys
extends into the chinese territory
attack attack
the rancid cat ran a muck
a much needed lightning struck
and exploded the night into a huge party of fire light
desire, an ocean of angel lyres
play singular tunes to me as i lay
bare, naked in the silent moonlit sun
teething, literally reething and searching
for the top of the highest pain-filled mountain
alas, i found gory glory
in the hands of the devilish zanzibar story:
NEVER MORE
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Posted: September 29, 2005 12:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2005 12:37 PM PDT
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