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What do u think i am! (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
What do u think i am! i was born on an empty island a deceitful pathway to empty noise silent fingers running through my soul do u think u know me like a volcano flows rapidly like when pteredactils roamed the intense loudness awakenes my black-laced fists raining onto whoever stands in my way the feelings of joy encampuslate my lost energy starlit moons are my own heaven the night is who i seek the geeks shall enherent the earth the birthright of the seven killjoys extends into the chinese territory attack attack the rancid cat ran a muck a much needed lightning struck and exploded the night into a huge party of fire light desire, an ocean of angel lyres play singular tunes to me as i lay bare, naked in the silent moonlit sun teething, literally reething and searching for the top of the highest pain-filled mountain alas, i found gory glory in the hands of the devilish zanzibar story: NEVER MORE

Up the ladder: Completely Psychotic
Down the ladder: Left for You

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5644
Posted: September 29, 2005 12:37 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2005 12:37 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] zodiac @ 86.108.14.15 | 1-Oct-05/7:05 AM | Reply
The best part was "encampuslate". Have you ever read anything, ever?
[6] Dovina @ 12.104.106.3 | 2-Oct-05/12:05 PM | Reply
The best part is "a deceitful pathway to empty noise." Zodiac is attracted to you in a spelling or spell-binding way.
[8] Bethy @ 24.222.32.205 | 3-Oct-05/12:32 PM | Reply
excellent Jon
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