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What do u think i am! (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp

What do u think i am! i was born on an empty island a deceitful pathway to empty noise silent fingers running through my soul do u think u know me like a volcano flows rapidly like when pteredactils roamed the intense loudness awakenes my black-laced fists raining onto whoever stands in my way the feelings of joy encampuslate my lost energy starlit moons are my own heaven the night is who i seek the geeks shall enherent the earth the birthright of the seven killjoys extends into the chinese territory attack attack the rancid cat ran a muck a much needed lightning struck and exploded the night into a huge party of fire light desire, an ocean of angel lyres play singular tunes to me as i lay bare, naked in the silent moonlit sun teething, literally reething and searching for the top of the highest pain-filled mountain alas, i found gory glory in the hands of the devilish zanzibar story: NEVER MORE

Bethy 3-Oct-05/12:32 PM
excellent Jon




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