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No name for the poem...Lost in emptiness (Free verse) by Prince of Void
Time to Time …passing by the same way Though void to void of the day …. Close to darkness faced to my infiniteness Emptiness to my poems … Hopelessness to my dreams… All carrying to my vain then to my brain And then thousands of nightmares come out Poor down to the poorest fantasy of my imagination Crown such despair in the throne of kingdom Lost in the sense of absence Just tears has seized the sadness And breezed to my madness End up in whispers of nobody into my ears Fading into my fears Word by word …they are useless tries to be As yesterday I was ……..

Up the ladder: ??
Down the ladder: Aimless

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5665
Posted: May 16, 2004 12:37 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2004 12:37 PM PDT
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[n/a] Prince of Void @ 217.218.131.136 | 16-May-04/12:40 PM | Reply
emptiness is my business ....despair is my blood
[5] sliver @ 66.87.134.129 | 16-May-04/7:41 PM | Reply
Then one would think you might know how to spell vein.
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