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With Reckless Abandon (Free verse) by MacFrantic
A bastard corination destroying effigies Frail ghosts haunting idle junctures Kissing loud mouths Never opposing prayer Quilted rivers Strange temptations Underneath vibrant water X-chromosomes yielding zilch

Up the ladder: untitled # 3
Down the ladder: We're Off

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3906
Posted: June 8, 2004 10:02 PM PDT; Last modified: June 8, 2004 10:02 PM PDT
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[n/a] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.16 | 9-Jun-04/3:13 PM | Reply
If god'swife is so keen on that little *2*, then I suggest that a reason be provided.

Anything below a 3 without so much as scant resonance of a rationale is total bullshit*
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.253.120 > MacFrantic | 9-Jun-04/3:28 PM | Reply
Having taken time to untangle all the adjectives she was probably pissed off to realise that the poeme was complete gibberish.


[n/a] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.49 > richa | 9-Jun-04/6:51 PM | Reply
Now, I wouldn't say gibberish, exactly. I used these terms metaphorically, which is ironic when the whole thing is a metaphor itself.
[8] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 > MacFrantic | 9-Jun-04/5:10 PM | Reply
"Anything below a 3 without so much as scant resonance of a rationale is total bullshit" is total bullshit. -2.999999-
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 198.81.26.49 > zodiac | 9-Jun-04/6:49 PM | Reply
I know! I was so proud of that!
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.21.41 | 10-Jun-04/6:24 AM | Reply
everything above 3 and everything below, to infinity, is total bullshit. 10
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