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untitled # 3 (Free verse) by noonewantstobealone
Do you ever feel abandoned?
You're so lost and lonely,
you want to pass away,
you want to hide away.
Disregard all of the problems that
Haunt you.
Can you do that?
Can you take a gun
And pull the trigger?
Can you take a knife
And slice every vein?
Will you whimper
And beg for release?
Liberate yourself from all the
Tender wounds that are
Opened again and again everyday.
Brand new lesions, covering your heart,
Scars. That will never go away.
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Posted: October 26, 2003 7:45 PM PST; Last modified: October 26, 2003 7:45 PM PST
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