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untitled # 3 (Free verse) by noonewantstobealone
Do you ever feel abandoned? You're so lost and lonely, you want to pass away, you want to hide away. Disregard all of the problems that Haunt you. Can you do that? Can you take a gun And pull the trigger? Can you take a knife And slice every vein? Will you whimper And beg for release? Liberate yourself from all the Tender wounds that are Opened again and again everyday. Brand new lesions, covering your heart, Scars. That will never go away.

Up the ladder: Jose Streets
Down the ladder: The Playground

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3883
Posted: October 26, 2003 7:45 PM PST; Last modified: October 26, 2003 7:45 PM PST
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[6] baphomet @ 24.126.116.54 | 26-Oct-03/8:41 PM | Reply
(TEAR)hit home,SOB
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