poemranker ::untitled # 3 by noonewantstobealone

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untitled # 3

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Oct 2003 · 1 comment

Do you ever feel abandoned? You're so lost and lonely, you want to pass away, you want to hide away. Disregard all of the problems that Haunt you. Can you do that? Can you take a gun And pull the trigger? Can you take a knife And slice every vein? Will you whimper And beg for release? Liberate yourself from all the Tender wounds that are Opened again and again everyday. Brand new lesions, covering your heart, Scars. That will never go away.

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[6] baphomet 26-Oct-03/8:41 PM Reply
(TEAR)hit home,SOB
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