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sweet kissing me there (Free verse) by misslexy
Your eyes consume me Hypnotize and undress me Pull me under I've waited so long for this I don't think I can handle this For this is the first time Your lips will meet mine At first ever so gently Lips so soft against me You playfully bite me I love how this feels You probe your tongue deep Deeper So deep it takes my breath away Yet I have no use for air As I am in the ecstasy Of your kisses You give me oxygen My heart beats faster Synchronized with your deep kisses Kisses that free my every inhibition Make my insides feel soft and beautiful Burst with pleasure that only your kisses gives Deeper Your kisses grow deeper My lips swell to point of explosion I've waited so long for this I don't think I can handle this Your tongue probes deeper Stronger I can't stand it Can't hold it I'm Cumming You brought me How can this be? To feel such pleasure Without you touching me Yet I feel you as vivid As you are not here I love how you feel When you're kissing me there

Up the ladder: The Fence
Down the ladder: charred pixels

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7402
Posted: June 9, 2004 11:53 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2004 11:53 PM PDT
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Comments:
[4] god'swife @ 209.178.135.111 | 10-Jun-04/12:37 PM | Reply
eewww.
[7] New Life Drug @ 69.106.238.155 | 10-Jun-04/11:20 PM | Reply
makeout sessions gone too far. HAHAHAHA luv it.
[7] edpeterson @ 68.79.21.41 | 11-Jun-04/5:59 AM | Reply
overdone. cut half of it.
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