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Do You Rue Barbed Pi? (Free verse) by MacFrantic I am an apple of my own eye
An obstruction of justice but
While I hang around in a house of cards
I cannot find a true joker
My love's pilot light is on
Yet I can't hold a candle to her
She's driving me over the edge
And I'm stuck here in the trunk
Before it dawns on me
That the sun is rising
Let your flush emotion
Trump that straight face
Whenever you break my heart
It feels like false gold
In my treasured chest
You will never hold my breath
Life is easy to understand
Like high bridges or clouds
If you regret us to-get-her
Then leave like a tree
I am an ocean
I am a wasteland
Up the ladder:
nicholson
Down the ladder:
sweet kissing me there
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Posted: April 30, 2004 6:23 PM PDT; Last modified: April 30, 2004 8:09 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0238404 Overall Rank: 7454 Comments:
Thanx Hyp. to-get-her is how you remember to spell together of course B^) A mild oddity that I needed to express.
Interesting enough. The cliches are best when they fit together though.
Best bits - She's driving me over the edge/ stuck in the trunk' and 'dawns on me/ sun is rising'
...aren't we all...
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If you regret us to-get-her ??
Than leave like a tree -> Then leave like a tree