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Hiding (Free verse) by QuirkyWonder
Blistered feet from walking A thousand miles In someone elses Well worn shoes To fully understand Exactly what they're going through. Thinking I'd lost you Somewhere along the way Only knowing that Eventhough you weren't by my side You were tucked away Inside my heart
Up the ladder: Recycled Stardust
Down the ladder: The Grand Adjustment
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8
Weighted score: 5.4
Overall Rank: 3183
Posted: June 12, 2004 9:49 PM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2004 9:49 PM PDT
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Comments:
[9] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 12-Jun-04/9:50 PM | Reply
good poem
[6] edpeterson @ 68.79.21.41 | 13-Jun-04/7:21 AM | Reply
first half cliche...sort of public domain adage.
eventhough ? second half, powerless. average
[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 13-Jun-04/2:50 PM | Reply
ahhhh, dat's chute.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 13-Jun-04/3:45 PM | Reply
Tucked away in a bap of shame.
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 14-Jun-04/5:30 AM | Reply
Hell's drooping anus enguffed this poem hole.
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