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Of Painting (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom Its a lovely picture
To hang from a wall
But only if its ripped like so
And then slighty scorched here, here, and here,
Now, then better put those flames out
There that should about do it
And the urine adds wonderfully to overall affect
It truly is a masterpiece
Of what?
Of my criticism.
Your painting?
Your painting looks like shit
It always did
I just made it real shit
Thats true criticism
Up the ladder:
Entropy
Down the ladder:
Consolation
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Posted: June 10, 2004 9:36 AM PDT; Last modified: June 10, 2004 9:36 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.7995286 Overall Rank: 411 Comments:
I like it. Loaded with attitude. Blessed with eight.
i almost lit my house on fire trying to give the burn affect to this letter i wrote...anyway it was for an english project, meant to be part of this scrapbook..my dad was so pissed and now he doesnt let me play with fire...
good news is a got a 100% on the project YEHAWWW i love painting nuns
umm..think same as god lady. but i also think the poems should end on the word shit. I like the poem though...it is defiant and kinda funny.
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It truly is a masterpiece
Of criticism.
Your painting?
Your painting looks like shit...
Thanks :)
<3 Jason