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Of Painting

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Jun 2004 · 5 comments

Its a lovely picture To hang from a wall But only if its ripped like so And then slighty scorched here, here, and here, Now, then better put those flames out There that should about do it And the urine adds wonderfully to overall affect It truly is a masterpiece Of what? Of my criticism. Your painting? Your painting looks like shit It always did I just made it real shit Thats true criticism

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[5] god'swife 10-Jun-04/12:47 PM Reply

Nice poem. You don't need to ask that rhetorical question, it's childish and ineffective.

It truly is a masterpiece
Of criticism.
Your painting?
Your painting looks like shit...

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › god'swife 10-Jun-04/1:09 PM Reply

Thats the most beautiful part about it. childish and ineffective, thats the best description of my writing style to date.

Thanks :)

<3 Jason

[8] SupremeDreamer 10-Jun-04/7:01 PM Reply

I like it. Loaded with attitude. Blessed with eight.

[8] New Life Drug 10-Jun-04/11:13 PM Reply

i almost lit my house on fire trying to give the burn affect to this letter i wrote...anyway it was for an english project, meant to be part of this scrapbook..my dad was so pissed and now he doesnt let me play with fire...
good news is a got a 100% on the project YEHAWWW
i love painting nuns

[8] edpeterson 11-Jun-04/6:02 AM Reply

umm..think same as god lady. but i also think the poems should end on the word shit. I like the poem though...it is defiant and kinda funny.