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Of Painting (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Its a lovely picture To hang from a wall But only if its ripped like so And then slighty scorched here, here, and here, Now, then better put those flames out There that should about do it And the urine adds wonderfully to overall affect It truly is a masterpiece Of what? Of my criticism. Your painting? Your painting looks like shit It always did I just made it real shit Thats true criticism

edpeterson 11-Jun-04/6:02 AM
umm..think same as god lady. but i also think the poems should end on the word shit. I like the poem though...it is defiant and kinda funny.




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