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Entropy (Lyric) by Miggy
Taking the same train ride As you check the sky line The repeating clouds symbolize Your dull and boring life Recorded up to this second now How it follows the one train track No shape in the mist to your abstract So suddenly you seek to relax Avoiding the effortless plans That won’t fill you up until you drown (Pre Chorus) Cause you just don’t know The more things change The more they stay the same (Chorus) You needed somebody To bring you happiness In form of endeavors You yearned for your life Anything but simple Looked for disorder Still sitting there on that seat Eager to see things from your sleep To be alive and lift you off your feet Instead of the crowd strangely too neat As all the color starts to fade Unexpected but need some fear Not the windows that show all clear In your life you want to steer Trying to put things in high gear And pull out from the safety lane (Chorus) (Bridge) The pattern You want distorted At equilibrium You quickly fold You thought reality Shouldn’t be so pleasant Change the channel So that you get some static (Chorus/ending) It's not disturbance, It's entropy motherfucker

Up the ladder: Consolation
Down the ladder: Brighton Beach

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.4615383
Weighted score: 6.7995286
Overall Rank: 412
Posted: April 5, 2004 5:17 PM PDT; Last modified: April 5, 2004 5:17 PM PDT
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