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Of Painting (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Its a lovely picture
To hang from a wall
But only if its ripped like so
And then slighty scorched here, here, and here,
Now, then better put those flames out
There that should about do it
And the urine adds wonderfully to overall affect
It truly is a masterpiece
Of what?
Of my criticism.
Your painting?
Your painting looks like shit
It always did
I just made it real shit
Thats true criticism
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