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Piccadilly to Baker Street (Free verse) by Caducus
Rushing through a pale pulp of expressions
I hear the droning of Piccadilly shadows
Followed by a twisting light and tepid gust
Diesel dusted rats squander beneath aluminium sleepers
As I am lifted by thin lipped deadline obsessiveâs
And a nervous American sweating in a Union Jack
Who rounds and ripples the rectangular flag.
From pages Larkin I pondered
On the bleakness of summer and people
Who spend there morns and eves here
Gripping a yard of pole in there hundreds
To never exchange an amiable glance
And to apologize profusely if so.
I spot a âTimesâ reader
Trying to ogle page three of a tabloid
A proper English gentlemen
On the outside immaculate
Yet inside destroyed,
I ponder pages Larkin
As I arrive at Baker street
Where cockneys become caricatures
And tourists become flashlights
Thinking to myself
Those clever black rats.
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Posted: June 1, 2004 11:11 PM PDT; Last modified: June 1, 2004 11:11 PM PDT
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