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We are what we hold (Free verse) by somemorepoetry
My sorrowful soldier
Hold that dirt
Let it grow into your hand
Throw that dust to the sky
Wait for the wind to blow
Then let out your breath
Scatter that soil
With thick strokes
Until it fades
Like dirt always fades
In the face of such a strong gust
Smile as you feel
Those roots
Crawling across your skin
Wait for another winter
When the earth has frozen
And dig
Until you see that neverending blue
Above your head
And that soil
Falling from your hands
Back beneath your feet
Where it belongs
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2222223
Weighted score: 5.611111
Overall Rank: 2272
Posted: January 30, 2004 8:23 PM PST; Last modified: January 30, 2004 8:23 PM PST
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