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love (Free verse) by francis nor capule
what is love? people often ask some answer happiness when with someone some answer missing someone waiting each waking hour for even just a glance waiting and hoping for that small chance does it mean bells and songs in the air whenever she's around? perhaps that is the answer, the answer to be found but true love isn't all that, not for me that is true love waits in patience even though spurned never knowing hate or anger never getting burned never wavering... not one bit always waiting for a lover's kiss patiently i wait for it to grow until i could tell you "i told you so" that there will come a time you'd fall for me then when that day comes when are hearts are free perhaps then you'll see that you and i were meant to be...

Up the ladder: Shadow's Stride
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9357
Posted: June 4, 2004 9:33 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2004 9:33 AM PDT
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Comments:
[7] DR Limerick @ 62.31.24.160 | 4-Jun-04/12:48 PM | Reply
good love poem like it!
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.27.120 | 4-Jun-04/3:26 PM | Reply
are you kidding?
[0] god'swife @ 209.178.165.179 | 4-Jun-04/3:30 PM | Reply
Are you the Down's syndrome love child of Rod McKuen, or some kind of retarded stalker? This poem is so bad it's frightening.
[7] DR Limerick @ 62.31.23.83 > god'swife | 5-Jun-04/1:02 AM | Reply
dear lady you cart call a poem crap just cos its not about you
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