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One O Five in the A.M. (Other) by Enkidu
Sheep Sheep sheep sheep sheep sheep One two One two Shit! I'm out Hey! Wolf! Wolf wolf wolf wolf wolf I can't believe my friggin' eyes A sheep Oh no, blood, wool, no more sheep Oh no, teeth, no more wolves Counting sheep is scary Fuck! It's not morning yet

Up the ladder: Scars
Down the ladder: Cross Pollination

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 5.03842
Overall Rank: 7206
Posted: June 2, 2004 9:09 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2004 9:09 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] sliver @ 63.190.65.81 | 2-Jun-04/9:12 PM | Reply
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
[n/a] electroman1979 @ 198.81.26.16 | 2-Jun-04/9:41 PM | Reply
sheep sheep,
we dont wanna hear a peep,

keep it to yourself,
before i ralf
[0] edpeterson @ 68.20.9.182 | 3-Jun-04/6:27 AM | Reply
i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
[n/a] Enkidu @ 198.81.26.49 > edpeterson | 3-Jun-04/9:10 AM | Reply
Exactly, so thanks, and I did write it in thirty seconds, at 1:05 in the morning.
[0] New Life Drug @ 69.106.238.155 | 4-Jun-04/12:55 AM | Reply
i absolutely love it. zero.
[n/a] dclark @ 71.30.10.41 | 1-Jun-07/3:33 PM | Reply
gay. this is just a simple poem with no meaning, unless you have it completly hidden, its horrible in my opinion, but maybe you wrote this fucked up.
[2] sca @ 124.191.64.6 | 7-Jun-07/1:13 AM | Reply
What the random?

You're not drunk or spaced, because the typing's coherent... but maybe it's transcipt of the post previously poorly written.

Either way, a little more spastic fantastic than poetry.

=> Jess
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