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One O Five in the A.M. (Other) by Enkidu Sheep
Sheep sheep sheep sheep sheep
One two
One two
Shit!
I'm out
Hey! Wolf!
Wolf wolf wolf wolf wolf
I can't believe my friggin' eyes
A sheep
Oh no, blood, wool, no more sheep
Oh no, teeth, no more wolves
Counting sheep is scary
Fuck! It's not morning yet
Up the ladder:
Cross Pollination
Down the ladder:
I don't rhyme enough, eh?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Posted: June 2, 2004 9:09 PM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2004 9:09 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7211 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.190.65.81
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2-Jun-04/9:12 PM
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This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
sheep sheep,
we dont wanna hear a peep, keep it to yourself, before i ralf
i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
Exactly, so thanks, and I did write it in thirty seconds, at 1:05 in the morning.
i absolutely love it. zero.
gay. this is just a simple poem with no meaning, unless you have it completly hidden, its horrible in my opinion, but maybe you wrote this fucked up.
What the random?
You're not drunk or spaced, because the typing's coherent... but maybe it's transcipt of the post previously poorly written. Either way, a little more spastic fantastic than poetry. => Jess 215 view(s)
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