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One O Five in the A.M. (Other) by Enkidu

Sheep Sheep sheep sheep sheep sheep One two One two Shit! I'm out Hey! Wolf! Wolf wolf wolf wolf wolf I can't believe my friggin' eyes A sheep Oh no, blood, wool, no more sheep Oh no, teeth, no more wolves Counting sheep is scary Fuck! It's not morning yet

sliver 2-Jun-04/9:12 PM
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote




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