Re: Chasing Droplets by dinah	2-Aug-10/5:46 AM
I can see your pain to give out life in full richness - the greatest of all gift and to now be held down And be bound out of life itself... what a pity definition of life.... for anyone ... woman or not
Re: Falling Away by Holy Sinner	1-Jul-08/5:37 PM
simply break thru the wall and walk away into freedom, only that love can not be found outside of the flesh...and all we are not is not us to blame
Re: Purple Reign of Blood by Kamikaze	1-Jul-08/5:30 PM
good old rhyme 4 something child-like and curried with adult-chill
Re: Go Ahead by misused	22-Apr-08/9:01 AM
Mom please don't heed this poem don,t go ahead anymore.
Re: Reaper's Chain by Ladybama9425	22-Apr-08/8:43 AM
womanhood in starked nakedness !
Re: Cornerstones by polaroidmemory	19-Dec-06/10:30 PM
"I am willing to try", if only all others can in the same spirit uphold...then we can bring Heaven down to Mother earth... abeg thematically tight... who can then care for "cliches" and "metaphors"...
Re: Then things forgotten inside by Prince of Void	19-Dec-06/10:10 PM
you don't find them... you don't find a poem...
Re: Here's your God by Caducus	1-Aug-06/10:03 AM
too many people see their God for what it is not... thanx Caducus for these new revelation.
Re: for one day only by pollywolly	11-Jan-06/10:02 AM
those who hunger after the sea, can only dream of the land and sand... is this life?
Re: the sweet smell of death by pollywolly	11-Jan-06/9:58 AM
only that it leaves us out, the death that in the end ends us is and comes from inside us
Re: I don't rhyme enough, eh? by Niphredil	5-Oct-05/1:27 PM
rhyme ; the criminal act of forcing words into feelings, when poetry in the first instance is a feeling feel for meaning that does not come wordless... I cannot agree less.
Re: Lost (not a poem) by Caducus	5-Oct-05/1:19 PM
true to the heart can love so out this world be worthy of a world eating up hearts before you can even earn a meal to live to see tomorrow?
Re: Mirrored by MacFrantic	9-Aug-05/8:22 AM
poetry in spirit, flesh and word
Re: First by Dovina	9-Aug-05/8:09 AM
and Jerry, after Adam fell into the pit like blind
Re: As the Weary Try to Rest by AnotherNothing	1-Aug-05/7:00 AM
I detest the rhymes they puntuate the flow of the rhythm and meaning of this poem , they draw you from meaning to mere sound
Re: BY ALL YOUR HEART by prettyktm	1-Aug-05/6:38 AM
Ilike the simplicity of the read to the lips, what is poetry, if not the tongue, the lips and the head in unism...
Re: You, the Line, and I by MacFrantic	1-Aug-05/6:28 AM
how we go from resolution made to more resolute and cannot turn back,... learn those who can make it work they should not foul their chance for coming back after the line is drawn may only earn another hard- put line... love this....
Re: The Fear of Being and will not be forever by Prince of Void	7-Jan-05/6:29 AM
we are eternally condemned by itself to nothingness, and for this we need not hold our selves in pain and agony over this since before death we all are helpless, but least that death is incapable of taking away from us is LIFE,lets live it in full and in meaning to make the world a better place , indeed to "REBUILDING A NEW WORLD"for the whole of humanity , this for me is my poem....
Re: Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus	11-Oct-04/6:38 AM
to be found out that your love means nothing, unable to stop the tears from rocking down from her eyes, you deserve this rejection
Re: Diaries of tears by Prince of Void	27-Sep-04/11:33 AM
dreams like the many ,too many outside the few, dying away with the days, you struck a good score on this to your name , how void is our lives.